You've got the right information, but it reads more like a headline than a sentence. Also, don't start a sentence with a numeral -- write it out or restructure your sentence.How about: A Butte County couple was awarded $150,000 in damages yesterday in Butte County Court for injuries suffered in a traffic accident in March. By the way, what happened to the other two leads in this exercise?3/10 - Please complete this exercise and republish it with the word "Revised" in the blog post title.
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You've got the right information, but it reads more like a headline than a sentence.
Also, don't start a sentence with a numeral -- write it out or restructure your sentence.
How about: A Butte County couple was awarded $150,000 in damages yesterday in Butte County Court for injuries suffered in a traffic accident in March.
By the way, what happened to the other two leads in this exercise?
3/10 - Please complete this exercise and republish it with the word "Revised" in the blog post title.
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